SlushWire Weekly #13 – March 29, 2026

Sunday – March 29

Bluesky Posts

#writingcommunity Received a “not my agent” email just a few mins ago from an agent I was really hopeful about that would take a chance on ‘Namaste India!’ but passed cause “not a for for me” yet her mswl says different…okay.

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#WritingTip: Write your book synopsis (focus on who, what, when, where, why) when the idea is shiny and fresh in your mind. It’s easier to write the blurb when you’re having fun plotting. When the book is finished, just revise it a little to fit the story you created.

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Multiple #RevPit editors can post #10Queries feedback about the same submissions. We’re not that organized to check with each other, especially because all of the editors are posting about at least 20 of their subs. So even if you think you saw feedback from one of the editors, stay tuned.

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It’s a distinct maybe. Could be. Or maybe it was one of the other ones . . . . I love seeing authors combing through my #RevPit #10Queries looking for clues about their subs and having that connection moment. Time will tell, but enjoy this moment!

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That I can confirm is an accurate guess. We’ll be diving into my mystery, thriller, and suspense subs, all age categories, in my Monday morning #RevPit #10Queries session!

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Hi #RevPit friends. Today, I’m going to share a thread on what I think is a lesser-known querying tip. An agent friend told me about this a while ago, and it makes absolute sense, so I’m going to spill the tea with you guys. #RevPitWaiting 💜💎

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10: A/F QL: Missing a bio paragraph! Bios should be last in your query and offer a glimpse of who you are and (more importantly) why YOU are the one to tell this story. FP: More formatting issues – double check guidelines! Need more to clarify the MCs goal and move plot forward.

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9: A/F QL: Extremely high WC for a debut seeking rep (keep ~100k even for A/F). MC sounds cool, but don’t know her age. Also don’t understand the motivations / journey mapped out in QL. FP: This setting is rich and vivid. Gorgeous descriptions – I’m immediately immersed!

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8: A/F QL & FP: Mechanics matter! Many sentences improperly structured & impedes meaning; pls proof your QL. MCs also feel more YA than A, and their personal goals / motivations feel a bit shapeless. The setting and MC voice are vivid, and I love the intended themes mentioned!

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7: A/F QL: Such good Asian rep this year! But conflicts & MC choices don’t clearly align – sequence of events in QL don’t make sense. FP: Love that we get right to a conflict for our MC to engage with, but the writing style is hard to follow. Not feeling grounded in the scene.

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6: A/F QL: Synopsis is wordy; got lost in the minor details. Show off your voice, but focus MOST on clarifying the bones (GMC). FP: another one with starting point issues – if the FP only show the MC moving towards the first plot pt, skip it & start w/ moment of engagement.

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5: A/SF QL: Don’t forget the ‘why’ of the comp titles you’re using! A shared setting, trope, aspect of prose, etc. FP: I question the starting point of this one. These pages build character and background w/o much of anything actually happening.

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4: A/F QL & FP: the FP starting point skips a whole paragraph of QL synopsis, so that tells me the QL can omit those details too. Backstory can always be woven in throughout an MS, but that doesn’t mean all those details need to be in the query.

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3: A/F QL: Query structure indicates possible dual POV? Make that clear in the housekeeping section of the letter. FP: the thing I love most about these pages is that the author does a beautiful job immediately dropping us into the MC’s head, conflict, and world w/o info-dumping

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2: A/F QL: Too much thematic description (this is not a letter to explain why your book will appeal to readers – let your pitch speak for itself) FP: Formatting matters. Stick to industry standard always. Prose is lovely but pacing and voice feel more YA than Adult.

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1: A/F QL: strong premise, but too much detail (esp when a conflict is both introduced and resolved within the synopsis paragraphs) – simplify! FP: very strong opening. MC voice is clear, but I craved more – feels like a starting point issue. Is this the BEST place to begin?

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A: adult F: fantasy SF: sci-fi/spec QL: query letter FP: first pages MC: main character POV: point of view GMCS: goal, motivation, conflict, stakes WC: word count **you’re all amazing & writing a book is a huge achievement. my #10Queries are NOT hype posts; they serve to help you improve / grow 💛

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surprise #RevPit besties!! 🤗 here early with my first #10Queries thread. a few notes: -this thread will feature ONLY Adult sub feedback (YA & MG coming v soon I promise) -feedback is vague & constructive, meant for all -I’ll pin this thread to my profile let’s start with some lingo:

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Q10 MG Fantasy Most of the query is strong. The important worldbuilding piece connects to the main conflict of the story. The stakes don’t quite work. The choices the MC faces don’t feel mutually exclusive enough for me to get invested.

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Q7 A historical A good start to the query. The MC’s motivation and Inciting Incident are clear, but I don’t get an idea of the story conflict, what actually happens in the story.

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P6 A Fantasy I really like the imagery the pages start with. It sets up tension really well. But then it loses momentum bc I can’t feel what the MC does. There’s external description but no internal sensation.

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Q6 A Fantasy Really good query. The MC’s motivation is clear and there’s a lot at stake. However, it’s unclear what actions the MC needs to take to deal with the story conflict.

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P5 A Fantasy Starts with a great hook but turns into a lot of telling. When the action finally starts I’m not sure what’s going on and it doesn’t match what came before.

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Q5 A fantasy Query needs some rearranging. The jump between different elements is jarring and the MC’s motivation comes way too late to have an impact. There are so many stakes that it gets overwhelming.

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Q4 YA Sci Fi This reads more like a synopsis than a query. It’s a difficult balance knowing when to use specifics and when to summarize. If cutting a detail doesn’t impact understanding, it doesn’t need to be there.

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P3 MG Fantasy These pages have some good action/dialogue but it’s very rushed. Several scenes occur in a short page span that it’s hard to fully immerse as a reader or feel the MC’s emotions.

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P2 A contemporary These pages get straight to the point and have strong conflict. Adding more varied reactions from the MC will sharpen them even further: Sensory detail, physical reaction, etc.

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Q2 A contemporary MC has a strong, relatable motivation and the main story conflict is clear. A bit more of how the story stakes affect them personally will make this shine.

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P1 A fantasy Prose is strong and the emotion clear. However, the scene goes at a snail’s pace and the sheer amount of details make it hard to focus on what’s happening/what’s at stake.

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Q1 A fantasy Personal stakes are well established but the pitch is short. Can afford to flesh it out with detailed plot events. Include the Inciting Incident; and you can include details up to the midpoint if necessary.

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Hi #RevPit community! Welcome to my first #10Queries session. Before we begin, here’s some shortcuts I’ll be using: MG=middle grade YA=Young adult A=adult MC=Main character

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30 #A #SF #10Queries #RevPit This sub has an interesting concept and explores great themes. But we don’t start the story until page 3 because there’s a prologue that tells readers what the theme is rather than showing it. Trust readers to get it and jump right into scene one.

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29 #A #SF #10Queries #RevPit Usually I recommend that the main character be with at least one other character for interaction in the first pages, but this works. He’s reacting to the environment, not just stuck in his head, and strange things are afoot. Enough to justify narrating the world.

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26 #MG #SF #10Queries #RevPit Love the inspiration for this story and the niche subject matter. Generally recommend not talking about inspiration in the QL, but I think this is brief, relevant, and charming enough to stay.

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24 #YA #SF #10Queries #RevPit We get a clear picture of this cruel dystopian setting, but less clear image of the main character and their goal. Filter this cool setting through your main character’s perspective to make this universe (and the stakes) more personal, draw readers in.

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22 #A #SF #10Queries #RevPit Interesting concept, like the voice, but it was a bit tricky tracking the shifting POV in the early pages. Readers need grounding – establish POV early after each shift, and make sure all the POVs are serving a story purpose.

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Scroll up this #RevPit #10Queries thread (pinned to my profile, if you get lost in the branches) for the hashtag shortcuts for age category and genres. Today’s session, I’m diving into my #SF science fiction and speculative subs. Space opera Wacky dystopia bio-tech nightmares

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It’s Rise and #RevPit Sunday Style. I’m launching another #10Queries session in just a few minutes.

Reddit Posts

[PubQ] Stay with agent or cut ties?

Comments: 6, Upvotes: 11

Hi guys, Love this sub and would be very grateful for any advice you guys might be able to share. I’ve been with my agent since late 2022; he’s from a good agency; he reached out to me after my first book (nonfiction, sold unagented to a lovely indie) did modestly well critically. As all these stor…

How to write a one sentence pitch for your novel?

Comments: 1, Upvotes: 2

I want to practice identifying the hook and creating an elevator pitch for all of my stories. What are some advice and tips you can share in approaching this?

[QCrit] Two Sisters, adult literary fiction, 78K, First Attempt

Comments: 7, Upvotes: 4

Hi all, thanks for taking a look and for any help offered. \~\~\~ *Two Sisters* is a literary novel of 78,000 words. It will appeal to readers of *The Wedding People* by Alison Espach, *Either/Or* by Elif Batuman, and *Death Valley* by Melissa Broder. Two sisters, Margaret and Frances, both lead …

[QCrit] Adult Queer Regency Romance- To Be a Lady (78,000/Attempt #1)

Comments: 4, Upvotes: 2

To Be a Lady is a queer Regency romance complete at 78,000 words for fans of A Lady’s Guide to Scandal by Sophie Irwin and A Gentleman’s Gentleman by T. J. Alexander. After seven years on the marriage mart, Lady Amelia Foxworth is ready to embrace spinsterhood and leave the ton behind. But a spins…

[qcrit] POPPALOOT Picture Book Ages 6-10. 680 words. First attempt.

Comments: 4, Upvotes: 2

Dear \[Agent Name\], When eight-year-old Mira stops asking her family questions, nobody notices. Poppaloot is always right there, ready to answer. The small purple star above Poppaloot’s head knows everything: the history of the petrified forest, the colors in ancient stone, exactly what to say. Bu…

Saturday – March 28

Bluesky Posts

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10/🧵Quick comment on log lines in case they’re needed for other contest type things or agent querying. The idea is for them to be like the brief voice-over at the start of movie trailers. A fairly brief sentence that hooks you in. Some of these are quite long.

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9/🧵Eighth – I highlighted my favorite log lines. A hooky concept/elevator pitch is vital in a crowded agent inbox. Could you summarize your novel in a quick elevator ride? Or in my case, while trapping an agent in a conference hallway (I did ask first, hehe).

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Writers, how do you find comps for your books? Is there like a database somewhere or any resources you use? Please send help 🙏

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📖🦈 Query Shark anyone? https://queryshark.blogspot.com/2013/02/ original content not ours but by queryshark.blogspot.com

MSWL

“Send me historical fiction or nonfiction from underrepresented voices.” Elizabeth Guthrie #MSWL psliterary.com/submissions/

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I don’t know why this #RevPit #10Queries post made things click for me, but it did. Until now, I somehow never thought of directly tying my opening pages to the promise of my query letter. Maybe this will make opening pages easier (and better) in the future.

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This issue is nuanced. But, some common problems: – Your ms is not the right age range – You’re being too literal about comps. Comps aren’t exactly like your plot + MC. They just need a similar main element + vibes – Your ms is a little outside the box, which may/may not be a problem

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Such a good question! Watch new book deal announcements on Publishers Marketplace and Publishers Weekly, etc. Pay attention for patterns in agent MSWLs (so, MSWL, Query Tracker, socials). It’s not looking for one factor but rather more like tracking the stock market over time

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It’s hard for a lot of authors! A successful query takes an understanding of copy writing, whether taught or intuitive, so even mastering fiction writing doesn’t necessarily guarantee being good at query letters.

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It’s a definite maybe! The authors for each submission included in one of my #RevPit #10Queries sessions will get an email from me confirming which post was about your sub But not until AFTER the winner announcements on April 13th So you can live in suspense until then!

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You can name tropes in your query, but it isn’t required. In general, I advise focusing on the selling points. So if you have tropes that are a strong selling point, go for it! Just don’t use a lot of your word count on it.

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Q10 YA Horror. Very nice weaving together classic horror tropes with new-school classic tropes for an interesting combination with a lot of potential. I worry the main trope is getting a little lost, and we might need to give some earlier allusions through deliberate word choice

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P9 Nice opening pages, but they aren’t really giving what the query promises. It seems more likely that this isn’t the best place to start (even though it’s an important scene!) than the query letter is off base. Let’s start with the good stuff, not exposition

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Q9 YA Romantasy Intriguing premise! I think this query is actually a little too short and the summary portion could use some fleshing out. Maybe cut some of your bio to make space if needed. BUT! For #RevPit, it gives me the gist, and that’s all I need

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P8 Ooh I’m torn. Lovely elements highlight the polarities of the story, but the voice feels muffled beneath an attempt to grab the reader’s attention. The good news: it gets better as the scene goes on, which makes me think this is an “opening pages are hard” issue

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Q8 Adult horror. This title is so in line with the subgenre and tropes. The query itself is too long and gives too much information. We need to focus on the details that matter most: main conflict, stakes, hinting at the main character’s arc. It may mean leaving some things out

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P7 I see what you’re going for here, but it feels a little forced. There’s too much expo, and the scene overall feels stagnant. Those dreaded words: I’m not sure this is quite the right place to start. How can we make this more engaging and relevant to the story?

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Q7 YA Fantasy (but age isn’t in the query) When you have something that’s a strong selling point, you want to highlight it. And this def has a strong selling point–you just have to dig a bit for it. I have a lot of big thoughts about how to make that clearer

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19 #A #BC #10Queries #RevPit Love the remote setting and the comp titles. Unclear POV transition between prologue and first chapter. This can distract readers right out of your story, break the spell of fiction.

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P6: Very very promising. I’m seeing a lot of subtext here that hints at the aforementioned themes. And this first line? Definitely memorable. What’s important is not that it slaps the reader in the face but that it uses that as the foundation the rest of the scene is built on.

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17 #A #C #10Queries #RevPit Like the first scene, but feel free to trim unnecessary “warm up” dialogue. ✂️ “Hi how are you?” “I’m great, and you?” “I’ve been doing well.” We don’t need the “Minnesota 5 minute warm-up” for every conversation in fiction. 🌟Get right to “Why are you here?”

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16 #YA #C #10Queries #RevPit Great opening scene buried beneath a much too long query letter. Should be one page around 350 words total. Here’s a good resource janefriedman.com/query-letters/

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Q5 Adult fantasy. I’ve seen a lot of people comp to this particular author, but this is the first time I’ve felt like the querier really *gets it,* and that has me excited. I don’t see a lot in the query that points to that, but it’s a solid QL.

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14 #A #H #10Queries #RevPit I like the MC, but could use a bit more grounding to know what’s happening in the first scene. We want readers to be asking story questions (related to the main character’s goal or motivation) not grounding questions (who is this & where are we) for reader investment.

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Ooh, great question. Let’s clarify. Yes, the standard is that queries should be presented as the author, not as the narrator. The narrative voice of the QL shouldn’t match the pages. BUT! If the ms is funny or dark or spicy, etc, the QL (+ comps) need to reflect that, the genre + age

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13 #A #H #10Queries #RevPit These first pages pack a punch. We get grounded in the MC and her goal plus essential backstory while in the context of an interactive scene where’s she’s pursuing her goal. Nicely done!

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P4: This is not a merch-worthy opening line, but the first paragraph is the perfect way to create an expectation and then subvert it–in less than 100 words. Masterful. 🤌😚. And it tells me so much about this writer + their craft. This is how you get my attention.

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Good morning (in the western hemisphere, where I live), #RevPit authors and friends! It’s time for my second (of a planned set of 5) #10Queries sessions. Yes, I started posting mine pretty early because I am a bit extra and I’m posting feedback for 50 submissions, broken down by genre.

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Here’s my thread, where I’ll be adding another #10Queries #RevPit session starting very soon this fine Saturday morning. Buckle up, Revelers! bsky.app/profile/did:…

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Side note: This is one way that #RevPit is v different from querying. Experienced agents are increasingly looking for mss ready (or v close) to send to publishers. RevPit is looking for these moments where there’s potential that’s not fully developed + how we can do that

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Q3 YA Fantasy. Query does its job–explaining the premise, selling the story. I’m not sure if the twist on this trope is strong enough to sell me on the concept. But the question is: is it stronger than it seems and we just need to bring more to the fore? 🤔

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P2 There’s a lot of strong (read: verging on purple prose) language here, and it doesn’t quite read like people talk or what I’d expect for the genre. To make this work, we need to tone that down and find this narrator’s authentic voice

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Q2 Adult Horror. This title! These comps! QL straight up reads like a back cover blurb. Use of first person in a query is risky. It’s historically a no-co but increasingly common in blurbs, especially self-pub, so it wouldn’t surprise me if it starts showing up more in QLs too

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Making sure the query is setting the reader/agent up for what they’ll get in the pages is super important. Queries are a lot like back cover blurbs on published books–they’re selling you on the premise + giving a hook to make you want to read. But if the pages don’t match…

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P1: Strong opening makes me want to read more & only make me feel 1000% bad I can’t select this ms. Tone here doesn’t quite match with what I expected based on the query, so I’m wondering whether it’s opening pages being hard or the query letter not quite giving the right vibes

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Q1: Adult Romance This query letter is great, and the premise is adorable. I read this subgenre, but I has a sad because it wasn’t actually on my wish list. It’s so so important to check the full MSWLs, y’all, and not just for #RevPit. Read thoroughly before submitting!

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I have two posts per sub–one for the query, one for the pages. You are welcome to guess if you think one is yours, but I can neither confirm nor deny. Feel free to ask any questions! I’ll get to them as I can, but I will get to them.

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After the contest, we email the authors whose subs we chose so they get the specific feedback and know which post was theirs. We’re mean but not mean enough to leave them wondering forever. HOWEVER it may take some time to get all the emails out so please be patient!

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For those who are unfamiliar, #RevPit #10Queries is when the editors post anonymous feedback on the query letter and 1st 5 pages of 10 of their submissions. Why anonymous? This way, anyone in the #WritingCommunity can learn from common issues that show up in the querying process

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Who’s up for some #RevPit #10Queries today? I’m going to walk the dog and caffeinate, and then I’ll get started

Reddit Posts

[PubQ] What to expect from call with literary agent?

Comments: 8, Upvotes: 29

Hello! An agent who requested my full manuscript said that they really loved the book and characters. She said she has some editorial commentary and would love to chat with me to see if it aligns with my vision. This feels positive, but can anyone tell me what I can expect from this conversation? T…

[discussion][success] tips for handling a call with my dream agent?

Comments: 2, Upvotes: 16

I’ve been querying the same agent with various projects for almost ten years. (I like their editorial approach, their client list, what they say they’re looking for in an author, how they represent work across categories, and their connections in the IP space.) Every time in the past, it’s been some…

[PUBQ] Author invited me to query her agent, what’s the best response format?

Comments: 4, Upvotes: 8

I’m getting back into the querying game after being out for almost a decade. (Different manuscript than I was querying a decade ago.) Last weekend at an academic conference I got talking to a fellow attendee. Turns out she writes fiction in a similar genre/audience as me. We chatted for almost an ho…

Is it ok to abbreviate words in a novel synopsis?

Comments: 6, Upvotes: 0

Especially if it is used frequently. Like saying Vice Principal at the start of the synopsis but using VP instead further in.

[QCrit] Adult Mystery Thriller, I KNOW SOMETHING YOU DON’T KNOW (76K, 1st Attempt)

Comments: 12, Upvotes: 9

Nervously taking my first stab at this! I got some early feedback from friends that my first draft was too specific/plot heavy so I’ve since scaled back, but I’m curious if I’ve now gone too far in the other direction. \+++ As the only Black member of the most prestigious sorority on her elite col…

[QCrit] BINDING CREEK Adult Literary Fiction w/ Magical Realism (66k)- Second Attempt

Comments: 5, Upvotes: 14

Thanks to everyone who gave feedback on my first version. This revision is based on your comments. Dear [Agent Name], I am seeking representation for BINDING CREEK, a work of literary fiction with elements of magical realism, complete at 66,000 words. It will appeal to readers of Silas House’s Cla…

[QCrit] INPATIENT, Adult Literary, Psychological Fiction, 87,000 Words

Comments: 11, Upvotes: 6

Hi everyone! I’m hoping to get some feedback on my query letter. This is the first manuscript I’ve completed, and will be my first attempt at querying. TYIA!! ——— Dear \[AGENT\], After a mental breakdown lands her in a psychiatric hospital, a therapist confronts the six months of professional unr…

[QCrit] Adult Romantic Horror – AS ABOVE (70,000/Attempt #3)

Comments: 4, Upvotes: 7

Hi, everyone! I’ve made some additional updates based on feedback on my [second draft](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1ruad7w/qcrit_adult_romantic_horror_as_above_70000attempt/). If you’re curious, you can find my first attempt [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1roadyu/qcri…

Friday – March 27

Bluesky Posts

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Let the querying process begin! I’m officially submitting my middle grade sci-fi novel Tested 🚀 If you know any agents looking for MG with high-concept hooks, neurodiversity rep, and fast-paced adventure, I’d love the connection. #amquerying #author #agents #booksky #writingcommunity

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those were from 10 difference romance genre adult age category subs. My future sessions will feature different genres. my subs are numbered These are shorter than I’ve done before, but I’m trying to not have everyone identify theirs immediately, like with previous #RevPit #10Queries sessions

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Tune in tomorrow morning for my next #RevPit #10Queries session where I’ll tackle a few different genres. Your musical hint – Saturday in the Park by Chicago Which, BTW, was the first major band I’d ever seen in concert Love those horns!! 🎺 Guess the genres! www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Mnw…

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Today’s 🦈 Shark action: https://queryshark.blogspot.com/2007/07/ original content not ours but by queryshark.blogspot.com

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10 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Love the time period and the tropes. Try listening to first pages with Read Aloud or read them out loud yourself to find word echos and reduce distracting word repetition.

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9 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Love this trope, but it needs more grounding. I get that the main character is confused, doesn’t understand everything that’s happening. But readers need a few more clues or they may abandon in search of a story with a clearer first few scenes.

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8 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Just a bit more grounding would make this opening scene less confusing. Adding a few words to explain who a new named character is in relation to the main character would do wonders to keep readers from distraction.

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Logistics question, do the #10queries come from ALL submission an editor receives, or are they from the shortlisted submissions?

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6 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Nice voice in this opening! Interesting word choice that reveals character. But memories and phone calls don’t replace “on page” interaction.

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5 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Starting in a good scene, but consider opening 5 minutes earlier in this scene, rather than explaning what happened. Show, don’t tell, this launch into the story.

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4 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Love the, “girl, you need to change it up” energy in these first pages. Good set up for the story’s adventure!

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2 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit The MC is on a mission in the first scene, good. But, how does this relate to her goal? Give us a reason to root for her.

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1 #A #R #10Queries #RevPit Great character voice, I feel for MC in the opening pages. Good balance of backstory and current scene with tension to ground readers.

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Greetings, Revelers, and welcome to my 2026 #RevPit #10Queries thread. I’m kicking off my first session now, but will attempt to thread my future sessions so people can find all of my posts together – that’s my plan 🤷‍♀️ First, some hashtag shortcuts #MG = Middle Grades #YA = Young Adult #A = Adult

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#TeamWillpower thought on queries: Story stakes have two pieces: internal conflict and external goal. What does the MC have to lose/learn/overcome and how does that impact the external goal?

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As soon as I refresh my tea, I’ll be back online posting my first #RevPit #10Queries session for the 2026 annual contest!!!!

MSWL

Book Broker — An interview with literary agent Katie Greenstreet “Take the manuscript as far as you yourself can possibly get it.” darlingaxe.com/blogs/news/b…

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#WritingCommmunity, when browsing #MSWL, what phrases do you enter in the search bar? I search for agents who like comparable authors/books to my voice, but curious everyone else’s tactic!

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Are you writing literary, mainstream, or book club fiction? Agent Katie Monson is judging a new FREE contest for writers. Ends on April 20, 2026. Winner gets an agent critique! Enter here: tinyurl.com/wdwcontest8

writingcommunity

If you are very sensitive to rejection. If rejections shut you down. If rejections in any way impact your writing in negative ways then solve for it. I advocate you acquire a rejection manager. This is a friend or family member who manages your email for you.

Reddit Posts

[pubq] 8 week exclusivity?

Comments: 19, Upvotes: 26

Hi everyone-I had an agent request the first 3 chapters along with a 3 week exclusivity. Today she asked for the full MS along with an extra 8 weeks exclusivity. Is 8 weeks for a full MS industry standard or can I respectfully ask if I can shorten that reading period? (Have 3 other agents waiting on…

[PubQ] Torn between agencies – advice appreciated!

Comments: 8, Upvotes: 14

Hello, Long time lurker, first time poster. I left my first agent last year after they couldn’t sell my second novel. I wrote a different book in a different genre, and am now fortunate enough to be in discussions with a few other agents for representation. I am torn between going with a bigger age…

[PubQ] Did you reread your manuscript prior to having the call with an agent?

Comments: 5, Upvotes: 12

I have a meeting on Wednesday with an agent who I think will be offering representation. I’m very excited! It’s been about 4 months since I read this manuscript (I started querying in December) and I’m wondering if I should read it again and have it fresh in mind for the agent’s editing thoughts to …

synopsis help 😅

Comments: 8, Upvotes: 0

I am braving the final part of my query package… the synopsis. My book is an adult horror thriller, and sits about 108,000 words. I will work on cutting that down before querying, but I had a question: how the heck do I cram all the details of the plot into a one—ONE—page synopsis? I have a chapte…

[PubQ] Pitching Agents at Conference

Comments: 2, Upvotes: 3

Hello! I have the opportunity to go to a conference next month, and on the list of agents available for pitching, there are two from agencies I’d like to pitch. It’ll be my first time pitching, so I’m not schooled on the etiquette. I have two questions: 1) If I already submitted to an agent at the …

Pitches for Multi-POVs

Comments: 0, Upvotes: 1

I’m currently working on pitches in preparation for pitch contests and writing mentorships, and am curious on the best practice for introducing multiple POVs. Is it better to frame one MC and frame the other character? (ie “when character X meets Y, X is forced to make a choice…”) Or summarize con…

[QCrit] Adult Historical Fiction – A CHRISTMAS CHEER (61K/Fourth Attempt)

Comments: 5, Upvotes: 10

Okay, kids. I’ve studied up on your incredible feedback along with many other successful queries, revised all week, changed one of my comps, kept the bio and housekeeping up top as suggested, got it down to right around 300 words . . . and I think I’ve got it now — or at least something much closer…

[QCrit] Threshold Guardians. Adult action adventure. Version 2.

Comments: 13, Upvotes: 2

I posted the first draft a year ago and you guys hated it. It wasn’t discouraging to me because most, if not all of the questions criticisms were things that are directly addressed in the manuscript. I will politely internalize all feedback, but do know that I am already aware that this is a tough s…

[QCrit] THE PROBLEM OF OTHER HUMANS – Adult Psychological Suspense (82,000 words) 3rd Attempt

Comments: 4, Upvotes: 10

Thank you for any and all feedback. Here’s a [link](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1rv7fmm/qcrit_the_problem_of_other_humans_adult/) to the second attempt. \– Dear \[Agent\], College student David has finally found his people. Rob and Kimberly. They do everything together – hike, camp…

[QCrit] Wet Ink, Literary Thriller, 80k words, Attempt #1

Comments: 8, Upvotes: 6

I just started querying this week. So far I’ve reach out to about ten agents to test the water and had two rejections. I wasn’t aware of this sub until now, so holding off on sending more until I revise my query a little. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks a ton! Dear Agent, A via…

Thursday – March 26

Bluesky Posts

RevPit

I hate that I changed my #RevPit logline right before submitting. Upon reflection, I’m positive the original one is better, so I kneecapped myself. Anybody else make a last-minute submission decision? 🥴

RevPit

#TeamWillpower thought on queries: The strongest queries center on the Inciting Incident and the decision the MC makes right after. It’s important to know why they’re forced to act and and what actions they choose to take to deal w/the conflict.

MSWL

Something something 🙏🏾cannibalism as a metaphor for intense love🙏🏾 something something 🙏🏾gender-swapped Frankenstein🙏🏾 something something 🙏🏾bizarre and freaky and angsty characters please.🙏🏾

writingcommunity

The Difference Between a First Page that Hooks and a Novel that Hooks blog.janicehardy.com/2020/10/the-…

writingcommunity

If you plan to query an agent and go traditional publishing, it means you need to answer the ‘comparable’ question in your cover letter. A comparable is a recently published good selling novel in your genre. Not a film. Not 30 years old. Are you up to date?

literaryagent

Are you starting your story in the right place? #literaryagent Kathleen Foxx explains why sometimes it’s necessary to rewrite the opening chapters of a novel. It’s all on the #storynerd podcast! STORYNERD.CA

Reddit Posts

[AMA] Four r/PubTips Published Fantasy Writers

Comments: 151, Upvotes: 53

# The time has come: the AMA, which delightfully started far earlier than intended, is over. While Gen, Andrea, Emily, and Julie may stick around or check back in the morning to make sure everything has been addressed, we request that no new questions are posted after this time. Thank you to our gue…

[QCrit] YA Romantasy = SPIN OF FATE (90k, First Attempt)

Comments: 9, Upvotes: 6

Hi everyone! I’m preparing for my second round of querying and would really appreciate feedback on my query and opening. I’ve queried a small first batch. I’ve received form rejections so far, so I’m trying to determine whether this is a query/position issue or an opening pages issues before sendin…

[QCrit] HUNGERS ENTWINED – Adult, Literary Suspense (90K/attempt 5)

Comments: 13, Upvotes: 1

Hi folks, Great actionable comments last week! Simplify, clarify, focus – got it. Each POV mentioned must have stakes, conflicts, and interconnected purpose – got it. I hope this iteration is getting better! Dear \[agent\], Please consider *HUNGERS ENTWINED,* my 90,000 word literary suspense no…

[QCrit] THE KID’S REVENGE, Adult Historical Fiction (120k, First Attempt)

Comments: 9, Upvotes: 4

Dear \[AGENT\] I am looking for representation for my debut Adult Historical Fiction, THE KID’S REVENGE. After nine-year old Eli witnesses a Romanian police officer massacre his entire family, he makes a promise to himself and to God to find and kill the man as vengeance. As an orphaned Jewish boy…

[Qcrit] METAL AUGUST, adult science fiction, 85,000 words, third attempt

Comments: 12, Upvotes: 1

Thank you so much to everybody for your feedback and time. I’ve been doing a lot of work to lock this thang in. I’m still not sure what recent work to compare my manuscript to so if you have any ideas, let em rip. Dear \[AGENT\], I am seeking representation for *METAL AUGUST,* a science fiction …

Submission Status

Marie Lamba – Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency

Submissions OPEN via QueryManager Form

Genres: middle grade, young adult, adult fiction, memoir, nonfiction, picture books, graphic novels, biography, cookbooks, history, humor, journalism, lgbtq fiction, lgbtq nonfiction, pop culture, psychology, science, travel, action adventure, family saga, fantasy (no genre sci fi or high fantasy), general fiction, historical fiction, humor fiction, mystery, womens fiction, commercial fiction, multicultural fiction, satire, film entertainment, celebrity, cookbook cooking, money finance, gardening, lifestyle, animals, womens issues, upmarket fiction, art, technology, parenting, environment, current events affairs, chick lit, health wellness, self help, true…

Jessica Killingley – The bks Agency

Submissions OPEN via E-Mail

Genres: humor satire,literary fiction,science fiction,speculative

Bethany Weaver – Weaver Literary Agency

Submissions OPEN via QueryManager Form

Genres: romance, fantasy science fiction, juvenile fiction, childrens books, middle grade fiction, young adult fiction, action adventure, chick lit, commercial fiction, contemporary fiction, crime fiction, erotic fiction, general fiction, graphic novel, horror, magical realism, mystery, new adult fiction, religious fiction, suspense fiction, humor nonfiction, journalism, lgbtq nonfiction, pop culture, spirituality, true crime, womens issues

Robert Broder – Martin Literary Management

Submissions OPEN via QueryManager Form

Genres: children’s fiction, graphic novel fiction, memoir nonfiction, middle grade fiction, picture book fiction

Katie Gisondi – Laura Dail Literary Agency, Inc.

Submissions are CLOSED

Genres: bipoc literature, childrens, commercial, east asian literature, fantasy, graphic novel, humor, lgbtq, middle grade, new adult, romance, romcom, south asian literature, south east asian literature, west african literature, young adult, cultural criticism, health, pop culture, relationships and family, science, self help, wellness, nature, lgbtq nonfiction, pop culture, science fiction, cultural social issues, horror, family, narrative nonfiction, romance, fantasy science fiction, lgbtq fiction, humor fiction, new literary agents, history, mystery, money finance, science, lifestyle, psychology, womens issues, medical medicine, technology, sports,…

Donya Dickerson – Aevitas Creative Management

Submissions are CLOSED

Genres: business, current events, dating relationships sex, design, film entertainment, fitness, food drink, gardening, health wellness, how to, money finance, narrative nonfiction, parenting, pop culture, psychology, self help, womens issues

Sarah Gerton – The Caldwell Agency

Submissions are CLOSED

Now at: The Caldwell Agency

Genres: science fiction, horror, middle grade fiction, young adult fiction, narrative nonfiction, historical fiction, fantasy, crime, thriller, action, new adult fiction, juvenile nonfiction, fiction: horror, fiction: paranormal, fiction: sci fi fantasy, childrens: young adult fiction, childrens: fantasy

Agent Activity

Bethany Weaver – Weaver Literary Agency

Sales: H.D. Carlton PHANTOM (Zando), Alla Zaykova BLACKJACK INTERSTELLAR (Orbit), “H.D. Carlton HAUNTING ADELINE, HUNTING ADELINE, WHERES MOLLY, DOES IT HURT, SATANS AFFAIR, SHALLOW RIVER (Zando)”, Harley Laroux HER SOUL TO TAKE, HER SOUL FOR REVENGE, SOUL OF A WITCH, HOUSE OF RAYNE (Kensington), H.D. Carlton untitled novella (Montlake), Sophia Slade NIGHTSTRIDER (Orbit), Marisa Calcara A FAVOR OWED (Entangled Amara), “Tate James 7TH CIRCLE, ANARCHY, CLUB 22, TIMBER, HATE, LIAR, FAKE, KATE, DEAR READER, IF YOURE READING THIS, IM DEAD (Sourcebooks…

Robert Broder – Martin Literary Management

Genres: children’s fiction, graphic novel fiction, memoir nonfiction, middle grade fiction, picture book fiction

Wednesday – March 25

Bluesky Posts

writingcommunity

Hello #writingcommunity ! Theres a new FREE contest for writers of Literary / Mainstream / Book Club Fiction at tinyurl.com/wdwcon8 📕📗📘📙Judged by Agent Katie Monson of SBR Media, via @writingdayworkshops. Winners get an agent critique of their work.

writingcommunity

New Agent Alert! Olivia Emerick has recently started acquiring at Metamorphosis Literary. Olivia is looking for many genres in YA and Adult fiction! Discover the full MSWL and how to query on our blog: www.writingdayworkshops.com/blog

literaryagent

A #literaryagent will often know after only ONE PAGE if they’re going to pass on a submission. Discover why on the #storynerd podcast. STORYNERD.CA

pubtips

cannot overstate how 📖🦈 the value of Query Shark https://queryshark.blogspot.com/2009/07/ original content not ours but by queryshark.blogspot.com

querytips

Query letter check! Hand your query to a friend, set a 60-second timer ⏱️, then ask: Who’s the protagonist? What do they want? What’s stopping them? What are the stakes? If they can’t answer, REVISE. 🚨 manuscriptacademy.com/query-letter-pop-quiz-test-clarity

MSWL

I’ll be there too! Teaching my Seeking Rep workshop and taking pitches—adult #fiction and #kidlit. Check out my #MSWL: serarivers.com and sign up for a pitch! I hope to see you there!

RevPit

#TeamWillpower thought on queries: The best character introduction features a contradiction. What the MC wants clashes with how they act, or their inherent nature is unsuited to the situation they’re thrust into.

MSWL

If you think your horror manuscript can send a chill up my spine, I’d love to read it!

RevPit

Hey #RevPit people. If we make significant changes to our work or letters during this process (whether the lucky winners or those who get new comments and do major revisions) does anyone know the rules for queries? What if an agent rejected the old version? What if an agent STILL HAS an old query?

writingcommunity

Our literary agents are ready to hear your pitches! April 11-12 Writing Away Refuge Zoom Pitch. Workshops, practice pitches & individual pitches with up to 9 literary agents. #writingcommunity #writingawayrefuge #writer #amquerying #amwriting #writerslife www.writingawayrefuge.com/copy-of-writ…

RevPit

#RevPit is a safe practice ground for the real world. We volunteer our time & skills so you have the best shot at getting representation or a publishing deal. So, please, read MSWLs & submission guidelines carefully to avoid rejections & wasting great opportunities.

RevPit

Begin with the housekeeping (title, age range, genre, word count, comps) Then blurb-the description of the book must outline the MC, conflict & stakes in three distinct paragraphs. It should be precise, concise, and all of those similar words in the thesaurus. I can’t stress that enough.

RevPit

Hi #RevPitWaiting friends. A couple of things many of us #RevPit #editors notice every year. 1. We get submissions that are NOT on our MSWL, in the genre and/or age categories. 2. Query letters that clearly DO NOT FOLLOW the submission guidelines.

RevPit

Hi #RevPit friends, I’m going to share some general pieces of advice for queries and opening pages ahead of my 10 Queries session. This thread is the first one. Let’s talk about the character’s internal journey in the query letter.

Reddit Posts

Key takeaways from Jon Oliver’s AMA with r/fantasywriters

Comments: 14 | Upvotes: 151

It was great to see so many people show interest in the AMA that r/Reedsy editor Jon Oliver ([u/Important-Airline761](https://www.reddit.com/user/Important-Airline761/)) did over on r/fantasywriters last week. [Link to AMA.](https://www.reddit.com/r/fantasywriters/comments/1ry58u2/ama_with_jon_oliv…

[Discussion] How many queries do you send in a batch?

Comments: 25 | Upvotes: 16

I’m dipping my toe into querying and have sent out about six in two weeks. When people talk about sending out a batch at a time, how many are they talking? I know there are no rules for this, I’m just curious what the average looks like. EDIT: Wow, thank you everyone for your great responses! I kne…

[PubQ] Differences in etiquette or conventions between US agents and British agents for query letter?

Comments: 15 | Upvotes: 9

I’m an American author and I’m sending a QL to an agent based in London. I’m wondering if there are any significant differences in either querying conventions or email etiquette between agents in these places. (e.g., is it fine to address agents by first name in the letter, as it is in the US? Is th…

[PubQ] turnaround time to send packet after agent liked pitch

Comments: 5 | Upvotes: 3

I’m an aspiring author with a newbie question. **I’m curious how long I can take to draft some materials that an agent requested** (not procrastinating, just tough life circumstances right now)? For context, I participated in a book pitching event with a local writers association that consisted of …

Silence = Rejection?

Comments: 3 | Upvotes: 1

Hi everyone, just looking for some insight. I submitted the first 3 chapters of my novel at the end of December to a well-known publishing house and in February an editor replied asking for the full. I sent that and she confirmed that she had received it February 25th. It’s almost April and I have …

Run the risk of writing a duology to pitch to agents?

Comments: 3 | Upvotes: 0

I have always planned on my book to be broken up into two parts (two books). But I recently read that publishers are not keen on debut authors having more than just a standalone. However, I know lots of debut authors who had a duology or even a long series to start. And no, the first books did not…

[QCrit] WHAT LUCY LOST, Adult Portal Fantasy, 110K (Second Attempt)

Comments: 4 | Upvotes: 13

Thank you so much for all the feedback and well-wishes during my first draft. I took it all to heart and have tightened the query significantly, removed superfluous details, increased the info on the romance subplot, and ended on the cliffhanger of the perfect parents. I am especially grateful…

[QCrit] LET ME BE THE ONE YOU BURY – Adult Fantasy – 78k – First attempt

Comments: 7 | Upvotes: 7

Dear \[Agent\], LET ME BE THE ONE YOU BURY is Flannery O’Connor’s violent grace married to Supernatural’s monster-hunting, all of it unfolding inside a Jane Austen novel of manners. Twenty-year-old Adelaide Carroway is a Banewright, a slayer of the supernatural horrors that fester beneath the star…

[QCrit] SPLIT TIMES, Women’s Fiction/Upmarket, 30-65, 76,000 words, 2nd Attempt

Comments: 9 | Upvotes: 2

I am seeking representation for **Split Times,** a 76,000-word, multiple POV, upmarket novel. It will appeal to readers of Taylor Jenkins Reid’s *Carrie Soto Is Back*, Miranda July’s *All Fours*, and Lauren Fleshman’s *Good for a Girl*. Karly Locke always believed that losing hurt more than winnin…

[QCrit] THE PROBLEM CHILD – 123,000 Adult Fantasy- First Attempt

Comments: 7 | Upvotes: 3

Dear \[Agent\] When Will Dawson is approached by a mysterious woman that tells him that imperial assassins are coming to publicly assassinate him, he must leave his life as an arena fighter behind and join an elite guardian order, the Saints. Will is the estranged son of the most dangerous man on …

Tuesday – March 24

Bluesky Posts

literaryagent

How important is the opening line of a novel? #literaryagent Kathleen Foxx shares her thoughts on this week’s episode of the #storynerd podcast. STORYNERD.CA

RevPit

The answers to questions help me see how much feedback you actually need. Not every ms that needs help needs a full edit, and I can often give resources or advice that can be a huge help. ⭐ Many authors who enter #RevPit but don’t win still get agents based on this level of help.

RevPit

By this point, I’m often looking at about 30-40% of subs. Pass 3 is reading the synopsis and answers to the questions on the form. The synopsis helps me see the big picture, but I also have to account for a synopsis being damn hard to write. So if I’m unclear, I make a note to come back

RevPit

Yes, I (and agents) can often predict from just those few pages what the ms will need for revisions. It comes from practice + experience. But where an agent is determining if the ms is sellable, I’m looking for promise and a clear vision of how to get the ms where it needs to be

RevPit

By the time I’m done with this first pass, I barely remember any of what I’ve read, but the notes and color coding help me on my next pass. Pass 2 is a thorough read of the QL and 1st pages. I make notes for 10Queries, plus anything that stands out to me about the ms’s needs

RevPit

#RevPitTeaser #TeamAmethyst 💜💎 I’m at my desk and ready to read ✨ query letters! ✨ And if you hook me, I’m going to read your ✨ first five pages! ✨

10queries

Yes! #RevPit #10Queries is anonymous feedback on 10 submissions. Each editor will do at least 2 sets (20 subs total). Some may do more. Here’s a thread to show you what to expect from last year’s contest. bsky.app/profile/jeni… Also! We email the authors whose subs we use so they know it’s theirs

MSWL

#MSWL update! I’m widening my adult genres just a bit. I already get a ton of horror crossover queries, so I’m officially opening the form to horror! I also am VERY selectively opening up to adult romance 🙈

Reddit Posts

[AMA] Announcement: r/PubTips Published Fantasy Writers on March 26th

Comments: 7 | Upvotes: 117

The mod team is excited to announce our next AMA guests: four long-time r/PubTips regulars and published fantasy writers. They will be here to chat about about all things fantasy **on March 26th from 7 PM to 9 PM Eastern.** We look forward to welcoming: >Emily Paxman (u/EmmyPax) is the author …

Does starting a fantasy story with undead rising immediately hook readers, or is it too abrupt?

Comments: 77 | Upvotes: 14

I’m working on a fantasy opening scene that starts on a battlefield after the fighting is over. Everything seems quiet… until the dead begin to rise. I’m wondering if starting with something intense like this is effective, or if readers prefer more buildup before major supernatural elements appear…

[PubQ] Multiple Revise and Resubmits

Comments: 8 | Upvotes: 13

Hi, A few months ago, I got an R + R from an agent who asked me to work on weak verbs, transitions, “showing not telling” and then resubmit. I agreed with her suggestions and carefully revised the manuscript and re-submitted. About 2 weeks later, she sent me another R + R saying that she liked the…

[PubQ] What was your experience having a lawyer review your agent contract?

Comments: 9 | Upvotes: 7

For people who hired a lawyer to look over your contract with your literary agency, I was wondering if you could answer some questions about your experience. 1. I read that literary agencies try to keep their contracts standard for fairness reasons, so if your lawyer actually wanted changes to the …

[PubQ] Any Reason Not to Query an Agent Multiple Times With Different Projects?

Comments: 7 | Upvotes: 8

Searched around a bit and didn’t find any questions exactly like mine (apologies if I missed something though). I know the general advice is “yes” but with people who have, like, two finished manuscripts that have reached the querying stage. I’ve had a good seven at this point so I’m wondering if th…

[PubQ] Is it a bad idea to post chapters of a different book to serialization sites like Royal Road if I’m trying to traditionally publish?

Comments: 5 | Upvotes: 5

I am getting ready to query an epic fantasy novel, and I have begun outlining the sequels, but I also would like a break from this series while I’m waiting to hear back from agents, plus I know some authors recommend *not* spending too much time writing the sequels of a book you haven’t sold yet. I…

[PubQ] How to write a query for a poetry book

Comments: 6 | Upvotes: 3

I wrote a poetry book. It’s an anthology. Since there are no characters and roughly no plot how do I write a query letter for it?

[QCRIT] THE ASHES IN OUR WAKE, Adult Speculative Literary Fiction, 144K. First Attempt.

Comments: 16 | Upvotes: 1

Hello everyone, this is my first attempt at getting my query letter critiqued. I’ve been working on this book for several years, including editing down from 223k words down to 144k. Dear <Agent Name>, When a quasibiological superintelligence quietly judges humanity’s future as untenable, it …

[QCrit] DRIVE ME, CRAZY Adult Romcom 80k – (technically 5th attempt)

Comments: 9 | Upvotes: 8

Hi, everyone! I posted this query a few times last year under a different name, but after a round of querying, I went in and revised substantially. I changed the name, the tense, and a lot of the story. I also managed to cut down 10k words. So I’m back at it again. Just dropping the blurb portion be…

[QCrit] YA Fantasy – Quake (Formerly Tremors) (104K/Attempt 3)

Comments: 7 | Upvotes: 2

Hey, PubTips! Last week I posted the [second draft](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1rvl8tt/qcrit_ya_fantasy_tremors_104kattempt_2/) of my query letter and got some awesome responses. Especially big shoutout to u/cinnamon-capybara and u/kingstonretronon for their expertise. I’m hoping I wa…

[QCrit] SOL INVICTUS, Science Fiction, 107K Words (First Attempt + First 300 Words)

Comments: 6 | Upvotes: 2

Hi [r/PubTips](https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/), After my first novel didn’t make it past the query stage (RIP — and thank you for all the help from folks here on the query a year or so back), I returned to a novel I had started several years ago. Since then, I’ve gone through several drafts o…

Monday – March 23

Bluesky Posts

pubtips

Just dropping a handy little breadcrumb: “[PubQ] If I receive an offer from a dream agent, do I nee…” https://www.reddit.com/r/PubTips/comments/1rywo2r Follow for more at https://writequeryhook.com

MSWL

If you think we’d be a good match, submit your dark academia manuscript to me through Query Manager!

10queries

Here’s what to expect from the #RevPit feed now: – Still doing #RevPitWaiting – Some but not all editors may also post #RevPitTeasers – All editors will be posting #10Queries over the next couple weeks. There’s not a set schedule for this so watch your chosen editors’ posts for updates.

Reddit Posts

[PubQ] How do you know if you’ve gone to second reads?

Comments: 29 | Upvotes: 22

As the title states, I’ve seen lots of instances of people talking about getting second reads, positive encouraging feedback, and updates about movement to acquisitions prior to an offer, and how do you find this out? Did the editor reach out to your agent unprompted to tell them they’re escalating …

[PubQ] How to prep for an R&R call?

Comments: 12 | Upvotes: 17

Hi all, I sent a query to an agent on Thursday. She requested my full Friday morning and then reached out this morning saying she read the first 50 pages and really loved it, but had a couple things she’d like to see changed, if I was open to an R&R. I told her to go ahead and send her feedbac…

[PubQ] Best format to pitch an agent your novel

Comments: 19 | Upvotes: 1

Hi all. the Writing Day Workshop event I have this weekend sent us some conflicting information and tips on how to pitch to the agents we reserved. On one hand it said to simply memorize and read our query letter, albeit in a verbal way that might have some changes to how its written of course. Bu…

[PubQ] Querying new project with fulls still out?

Comments: 5 | Upvotes: 3

Hi, I have two complete MS in the same genre. For the first one, I started querying 3-4 months ago & currently have 10 fulls under consideration (some quite recently too). Anyway, I recently finished my 2nd MS for a standalone and have a query package ready, but am unsure if I should wait for …

[PubQ] Do pitch event solicited queries have different etiquette?

Comments: 1 | Upvotes: 1

Hi all, I wanted to know if I should have any different expectations for solicited queries re: following up & ghosting, or if it’s treated the same as a regular cold query. An agent solicited my project from an online pitch event a few months ago, but I’d already queried their co-agent/partner….

[QCrit] CUFFED, enemies-to-lovers romantic thriller, 75k words, 1 attempt

Comments: 9 | Upvotes: 10

Dear \[Agent Name\], When FBI Agent Elizabeth White walked into her Internal Affairs hearing, she had already made peace with losing her badge. She might have tampered with evidence and let a killer walk free. She’s ready to pay for it. What she wasn’t ready for was Mikhail Frolov. The incarcerat…

[QCrit] LOVE SONGS FOR A GHOST – Adult Speculative Romance, 80k, v1

Comments: 4 | Upvotes: 10

Hi PubTips! Appreciate any feedback you have for me. Thanks in advance 🙂 \———————– Dear Agent, I’m excited to share LOVE SONGS FOR A GHOST, an adult contemporary romance with a speculative twist that is complete at 80,000 words. It combines the slow-burn supernatural love story of…

[QCrit] DAUGHTER OF FORTUNE, Adult Literary Historical Fiction, (106K) – 2nd Attempt

Comments: 8 | Upvotes: 5

I am seeking representation for DAUGHTER OF FORTUNE, a 106,000-word literary historical novel set against the Hundred Years’ War, for readers of Hilary Mantel’s *Wolf Hall*, Maggie O’Farrell’s *The Marriage Portrait*, and Lauren Groff’s *Matrix*. France is burning. Her pen is silent. But silence ha…

Sunday – March 22

Bluesky Posts

literaryagent

Hooboy! This is a big one! What the heck does “voice” mean when it comes to literature? That’s just one of the things we talk about in this week’s episode of the #storynerd podcast with special guest, literary agent Kathleen Foxx.

Reddit Posts

[pubq] for those who have received offers lately and nudged others, what was your experience?

Comments: 39 | Upvotes: 30

I received an offer last week (yay!). I nudged a few agents that had my full that were on my shortlist (three of nine), plus a few who hadn’t responded to my initial query (four of 42). Of those, only one has responded. I gave everyone the standard two week window, and I am not so much complaining…

[PubQ] Querying my former agent with a new book in a new genre?

Comments: 14 | Upvotes: 19

Odd situation, I know, but I’m hoping for anyone’s thoughts (especially agents). I was agented, until we parted about 7 years ago. It was amicable but it was my idea. We’d been working on a memoir for over 5 years at that point, and I had to face reality that the book wasn’t working for her (agent)…

[PubQ] etiquette for parting ways with an agent following unsuccessfully sub

Comments: 3 | Upvotes: 10

If your agent doesn’t feel you should continue working together, following a book that died on sub, how does it work? You just part ways and pretend it didn’t happen? With contracts or with the book, the book is basically dead, yes? And nothing is binding and you can’t really reach out to the agent…

[QCrit]: “LUJAIN” – Literary Fiction, 81k.

Comments: 5 | Upvotes: 10

I finished this novel a year or so ago and I sent out about 30 or 40 queries but I didn’t get a single response, not even a rejection so I kinda gave up and it’s been sitting on the back burner. I think my biggest issue was my query letter. I spent a couple hours tonight re-writing it and I think it…

[Qcrit] The Mother, The Magic & The Monster – 130,494 – Version 1

Comments: 13 | Upvotes: 1

Dear\_\_\_\_\_, After reading that you are looking for \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_I’m so excited to present to you, THE MOTHER, THE MAGIC & THE MONSTER. My first high fantasy novel, with strong themes of motherhood, drafted at 130,494 words. This is a standalone novel, with a se…

[QCrit] Literary Travel Memoir — THROTTLE ON (60K)

Comments: 8 | Upvotes: 6

Dear \[Agent Name\], I’m seeking representation for *Throttle On: Unstuck on the Way to the Arctic Ocean*, a literary travel memoir. In the summer of 2024, after burying both my parents and a brother, I loaded the smallest adventure motorcycle BMW makes and rode 15,000 miles from Austin, Texas to …

[QCrit] Middle Grade Adventure – THE LOST EXPLORER’S CLUB (42K/First Attempt)

Comments: 6 | Upvotes: 5

Dear \[Agent Name\], Twelve-year-old Oliver Finch knows his father’s name is a joke. In Victorian London, Bartholomew Finch arranged to be sent to the colonies after his disastrous expedition searching for the long-rumored Lost Explorer’s Club, a secretive society of adventurers no one had heard f…

Hall of Fame

🦈 Query Shark: April

Dive into the archives for query letter critiques and advice from the Query Shark herself.

👽 Reddit: It truly bothers me to see aspiring writers try to write without having read anything in their entire life.

I can’t be the only one, right? Can we talk about this for a sec? I don’t get the logic. How can anyone expect to write a story without having read one in the first place? How can you expect to tell …

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SlushWire Weekly #13 – March 29, 2026

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